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Recently I learned from the newspaper that normal universities belonging to the Education Department would recruit some students free. As a return, the students must serve as a primary school teacher for at least 10 years in his (or her) hometown. I feel that is a good news for me and I will contact the universities to get enrolled. First of all, as a farmer’s child, my family’s living condition is not so good. I can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities. I am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and continue my study. Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since I was a child. I was brought up in a mountain village. Many of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. If I become a teacher, I will devote myself to give them better education. Lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. After I graduate, I will return to my hometown and serve as a good teacher.
