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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,the Internet is important to our life. Especially in the aspect of communication. You can use it to chat with your distant family and friends. You may say "I have a mobile phone! I can use it, I don't need the Internet". It isn't wrong. But I think the Internet is more convenient than cellphone. You can "fact-to-fact" talk with others on the Internet,but you can't use mobile phone do this. But, to be honest, I don't think that electronic communication can't replace fact-to-face contact. First, it feels not real when we talk on the Internet. In my opinion, fact-to-fact contact is more interesting than electronic communication. Because you can feel their face expression and recept their body movements. I think it is really interesting things when we are talking with others.

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