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The impact of Internet on Interpersonal communication Thanks to the incredibly wide prevalence of Internet, admittedly, the communication between humans has witnessed unprecedented change in the last few years. On the whole, Internet, as a modern and efficient way plays a significant role in our daily life, which has even taken the place other traditional communicative instruments. Your exposure to the Internet makes you familiar with the undeniable fact that Internet is becoming an essential part that make a big difference in your life. Actually, it's Internet that cause spectacular conversion in all life aspects. Take interpersonal communication for example.As the advanced technological production, through Internet, people have no need to interact with friends or relatives face to face. It's convenient for them to keep in touch with each other at any time if they want. In addition to above, what is also noteworthy is on the ground of no limitation to regions, races, people have an easy access to the farther world, that is to say, they can make a rich variety of friends as many as possible, even someone they don't know, or there is dramatic distance between them. However, every coin has its two sides, Internet is no exception. Since its wide use, some people are driven by personal interests try they utmost to make money, such as cheat others to gain money or invade other private information during communication in return for benefits. Through what I have mentioned above, I may safely draw a conclusion that the impact brought by Internet communication is generally positive, but greater emphasis should be laid on it so as to let us can better enjoy its advantageous aspects.
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