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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。
Is it wise of those money savers? Nowadays, a growing awareness of necessity to save money has become a subject as rooted in students'consciousness as compulsive principle. According to the recent research released on www.baidu.com, most of the students are inclined to collect all kinds of coupons as well as look for group-buy deals if they eat out or travel. Definitely, they don't buy clothes unless in a sale. Such a heated craze demonstrates that students present are careful with their money in daily life. As far as I'm concerned, I stand firm to this economic living approach. There are two main reasons behind my notion. The first factor which pops into mind first is that money unquestionably plays a significant role in our life, the more money you possess, the more security you may feel in some cases. Obviously, saving money in your expenses through the ways mentioned above, can not only satisfy the needs for higher enjoyment, but also quiet a few money will be saved automatically, which assists you in acquiring money for urgent emergency or beneficial investment. The rest may be duo to the fact that try your utmost to keep a strict budget and save money is full of help to cultivate a great habit. Most students are born in a carefree environment, it's an excellent opportunity for them to experience life and build up their ability to face the real life. In addition to above, money is one thing that can't be got without any efforts. Actually, living in this competitive climate, money is not as easy as they think to earn. The household quote"production can never go fast than saving", which aim to enlighten us contemporary that saving money can really make a big difference. In conclusion, I claim greater emphasis should be attached to present tendency.Not suspicion for those students, but present them with powerful supports and immediate encouragements.