Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升。
With the rapid improvement of internet technology,more and more people get accustomed to chat in the internet,whose tools include phone and computer. Nevertheless,maybe,there stands a big chance——that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.As for me,I don't think so because of three reasons. Firstly,face-to-face contact is the way tracing back to ancient,which is a long-term habit for people.Besides,although electronic communication has been prevailing in recent years,talking directly when you see his or her eyes can exert an influence more fiercely.For instance,a mistake appears a couple who had married a multitude of years every time that the face-to-face and heart-to-heart contact would solve the misunderstanding rather than electronic counterparts. So we can draw a safe conclusion that in spite of electronic communication develop at a high speed,face-to-face contact will alive forever.