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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5944
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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用户练习作文:

With technology develop rapidly,more and more people move to live in a big city rather than live in their hometown,rural area. First of all,in my thinking,everything has two sides,good side and bad side.Someone claims to live in the countryside is better than living in a big city,crowded places.In fact,living in rural area does have many advantages.For example not only can we live much more healthier where there are less pollution with much more fresh air to breath.But also live happier and feel leisure when we live without high pressure or stress,working with freedom.On the contrary,it is not good for their offspring to live in countryside where they can't obtain professional education or specialize experiment knowledge which are guaranteed of their better future.From this point of view,maybe that's why more and more people choose to move to live in a big city in order to offer their next generation a better environment to live in. Above all mentioned,it is so superficial to claim to live in a rural area is better than living in a big city.

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