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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5945
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分40.0分
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用户练习作文:

Livnig in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. The air of the rural area is betten than the city of course. Because the rural area is more trees and less mobile cars and the air is better than the city.And there is less noise pollution in the rural area than the city. The more silente surrouding is good for people to have rest in the nights.And there are more trees and animals in the area, people can have contact with nature easily than in the city. So I think living in the rural area is betten than in the city.

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