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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22570
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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With the rapid development of science and technology, the Internet as a new route of transmission, it is playing an invaluable role. The rise and popularity of the Internet has changed the distance between the people and the world. Great changes have taken place in the whole world, especially for the values of our university students have an important impact. The positive impact of Internet on college students ' values 1、 Conducive to the formation of the modern ideas The Internet features such as global, openness and equality, makes the information transmission without borders, the network information exchange and share in the world. 2、 Conducive to the formation of an open way of thinking Because of the openness of the Internet, the Internet communication of information is not restricted by time and space。Help to change people's thinking in the present situation, prompting the breadth and depth of his thinking has developed。This way of thinking has changed the traditional disadvantages inherent narrowness of thinking, to cultivate students' divergent thinking, to expand the thinking of college students. 3、 Conducive to the expansion of interpersonal communication Internet to break the traditional time and space, expanding the communication space, it also breaks the association discrimination in the network, different regions, different positions, different nationalities, different ages of people are freedom, democracy and equality, Effectively expand the scope of college students' communicative objects, make college students change attitude to the value of the meaning of life in the reality, so as to set up the correct values. The negative impact of Internet on college students' values Impact on the values of college students Firstly,Weaken the national consciousness. College Students' world outlook, outlook on life and value is still in the development phase, vulnerable to the impact of the social thought the outside world。 Information on the Internet is messy and more, People are in an absolutely free environment to send and receive information。Those useful or useless, backward or advanced information in the Internet, it leads to the decline of College Students' moral awareness, social responsibility weakening. In the long-term contact, young students gradually appreciate and agree with the way western social life, political views, economic view, thus weakens college students' national consciousness. Second, the political consciousness fading. Global and open nature of the Internet makes increasing penetration of Western culture. Now on the Internet, the content of the English accounts for about 90%, French 5%, the content of the other accounts for only 5% of different languages in the world, according to the input and output information of the Internet traffic statistics, China accounted for only l %, and these two indicators in the United States is above 85%. This means that the western developed countries has a monopoly of information on the Internet ,western culture to Chinese college students constantly through the network, which affects our country university student's thought. College students orientation of non-governmental On the Internet, college students is not only the information receiver, and the maker of information and communicators. Because the Internet is the lack of government management and supervision, so any user can comment on their own intentions. It is easy to make part of the college students overlook the power of real-world constraints and arbitrary conduct information dissemination activities. Among these are rumors, leaks, unhealthy information, and no shortage of anti-government, anti-social, anti-human speech, resulting in misuse of information to some extent. In college, some college students may take advantage of this weakness of the Internet to spread harmful information, thereby interfering with normal social order. Threatening college students their physical and mental health and personal safety Online game greatly inspired the curiosity and exploration of college students, so that they find themselves unable to indulge in the network, and some through the night, resulting in damage to health, and some will have psychological problems. Some criminals use the Internet to cheat the students, endanger the safety of life and property of College Students。 Conclusions and recommendations 一、To explore the effective way of college students' values education in the new period We should emphasize the external education and pay attention to self-education. To make education received good results,colleges should take effective measures to arouse students interest and attention, leading them to think independently and get the correct value orientation。Such as ,watching the video,speech contest, essay contest, debate contest, class meetings, community activities and so on。In addition to the educational function of the school play , but also to strengthen the students' social education and family education through a variety of means。 2、 Strengthen network security legislation Relevant departments of network legislation, strengthen the supervision of network and purify network environment. At the same time, the government strengthen the cybercrime, for the formation of college students' values to build a good social environment. 3、 Strengthen the management of the campus network Schools should strengthen safety management of campus network, publicize relevant laws and regulations, to enable students to abide by the law. In short , the rapid development of Internet technology in today's world , it has advantages and disadvantages。As long as proper guidance, a number of adverse factors increase the vigilance on the Internet,as far as possible to avoid the negative influence on College Students' values。The Internet has become a convenient tool by which college students can be more detailed understanding of the community and to get real knowledge.

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