希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Mr.Johnson: address:sales-departmen@hotmail.com We already recevie your company's 3000 piece of products in 22th December.According to our signing of the No.35 order.The number of products should be 3500,but the other 500 piece of product we can't get it today.Sometime we should learn to believe each other.Please check your product list.We are looking forward to your early reply. Thank you Wang Haiyang wanghaiyang@hotmail.com