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now,some students are lose confidence .they thinks English is very difficult .so,they don't like English . but I don't think English is difficult .if you good good study ,you must get good gride . Don't worry , let me tell you what do you do , First you must hold on read English every day ,then you should remeber them ,Second you can join an English club ,and talk about in English , at last you could listen English every day I hope your English is better