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now,some students are lose confidence .they thinks English is very difficult .so,they don't like English . but I don't think English is difficult .if you good good study ,you must get good gride . Don't worry , let me tell you what do you do .First you must hold on read English every day ,then you should remeber them .Second you can join an English club ,and talk about in English .at last you could listen English every day . I hope your English is better