正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Now,some students are losed confidence.They think English is very difficult.So,they don't like English.But I don't think English is difficult.If you good good study,you must get good gride. Don't worry, let me tell you what do you do.First you must hold on read English every day,then you should remember them.Second you can join an English club,and talk about in English.At last you could listen English every day. I hope your English is better.