希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Now,some students are lose confidence.They think English is very difficult.So,they don't like English.But I don't think English is difficult.If you study,you must have good mark. Don't worry, let me tell you what do you do.First you must hold on read English every day,then you should remember them.Second you can join an English club,and talk about in English.At last you could listen English every day. I hope your English is better.