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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;请注意积累词汇量,拼写错误比较多;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As the society and our life are changing and improving,the happence of internet is necessary.the internet is more impact for us,because it makes our life more convient,we don't need to go out,but we can communicate with each other any time and any place.it can also make us to contact frequently.so it can also enhance our emotion.but i don't think the internet can replace face-to-face contact.because the face-to-face contact can make us to see every detail of each other,so it can more direct to feel.what'more,we can know their emotion change.

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