高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown I remenber is very pretty my hometown when i was a childern. you could saw the small town inclouded the tree,in the river,you could saw the fish playing in the water.Athought live wasn't rich,but they are very happy.they always visited sombody home after dinner. But, the hometown is change,