高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I remembered my hometown was beautiful when I was a children. you couldsee the small town inclouded the tree,in the river,you could see the fish playing in the water.Athought peoplee live wasn't rich,but they are very happy.They always visited somebody home after dinner. But, the hometown is change, I don't like