小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,her name is Lily,and as my similar age.She is a beautiful girl with long hair,and usually has a pink skirt.she takes good study, and the english is the best of them.but,she doesn't like the P.E.I like her very mush,and i believe our friendship can keep fresh forever.