小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have two good friends. One is my school classmate. The other is my college roommate.I can tell anything to them. They will give me some advice about anything . So whenever or wherever I can call them and ask them chat with me. Some years later，when I am old,I will take them to travel the world. I expect that day's coming.