小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a six years daughter. She is a very beautiful girl. She has a short hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is very clever. She likes singing and dancing. She is good at computer games and chess. Also she is a nice girl. She likes to help other classmates. Her classmates likes to play with her. I like my daughter.