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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? With the development of science and technology,tourism is a more than popular business in china.For there being a kind of wonderful views in china,more and more tourists come to the country for sight-seeing.But,it also companies with some question of environment pollution. Firstly,the number of the tourist added,out of question,will harm to the environment in a way.Recently,we time to time learn that some tourists abuse their food in hand to feed the animals in the park,which caused some animals been having sick.Secondly,when thousands of people get together at the seam place,it will be very crowed and will urge citizen to broaden production,which accelerate resource used up.What's more,as tourists business will bring a mount of interest,majority traders will try their best to product some no green things. In a word,every thing has two sides.So,when tourists business brings benefit,it also will harm to environment.
