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In my opinion,i think it make us smart consumers to collect all kinds of coupons,look for group-buy deals when we eat out or travel and buy clothes in a sale.My reasons are following: First,all these way can help you save money for other things which need money.as it going,more pain,more gain.If you commit more,you can develop yourself better.Second,though you pay less for what you want,but you have the same as what you like.It will be a great experience with a sense of success in your life.It can increase your happiness. There are two equal important things in the history of human beings,one is creating,the other is saving.
