单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;能够使用一些简单的从句,但需注意一些句子错误;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I have a girl friend,she very happy every day.she is good very much,our eat together,sleep together.she like to sleep,me like to eat,our always say the pig to our.she is my best friend.I like to she,I think our are friend in the future.our big she leave to me ,I want to told she you face in my heart ,but I do not meet to you,where are you.