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I love to learn English English is one of the subjects in school.It's also one of the most important subjects .As you know,It's difficult for somebody,and easy for other body.It depend on if you love English.I think English is easy and I like English very much.Althogh my English grade is no the best,I think I did my best,and my English will be better