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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36949
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强学术词汇的使用;请注意分段。

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since last summer, i have written to my pen pal, seda, who lives in turkey. i became acquainted with her when i went to england for a study tour.   we stayed with the same family, and she was my roommate and classmate as well. sometimes we went to the movies together after dinner. seda is very easy to get along with. i will always remember the two weeks i spent with her. we didn't forget each other and kept writing to each other after we returned home. although i haven't seen her again since i left england, i still know how she is through letters, cards and photographs. seda tells me her secrets and also shares her happiness and sadness with me . both of us hope that we will meet each other somewhere one day.   maybe i'll go to turkey to visit her, or she'll come to taiwan to visit me.

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