小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；作者词汇量偏少，还要加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

there is an aoyu in the picture. the aoyu has a green tail, two colorful horns and the silver skin. it’s a silver aoyu. it looks beautiful and lively. 　　aoyu dance is a traditional dance in shawan piaose. it means it can always get the first. it’s a good symbol. everyone likes it very much.