小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

　　i want to be a model student. what shall i do? 　　i should be polite. i should study hard. i should capful and helpful. i should walk in the corridors. 　　i should throw rubbish in the bin. i should be quiet in the library. i shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. i shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. i shouldn’t run in the corridors. i shouldn’t fight. i shouldn’t be noisy in the library.