小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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　　My wenkend is very fun.On Saturday，I go to the zoo with my friends.And we look the tiger,cat，monkey 。That is fun!On Sunday ，I am going to go tothe bookstore with my friend.I am going to look some good books.I am going to the restanrant .Then we are going to bake a cake .In the evening ,I am going to watch TV with my aunt.I am have a happy wenkend!