小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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　one sunday afternoon when i was learning to ride my bike, i fell down and hurt my arms badly. as soon as my parents heard this, they took me to the hospital at once. 　　during my stay in bed, they took good care of me and cheered me up. meanwhile, they helped me with my lessons. with their help, i caught up with my classmates. now i'll try my best to study well to repay my parents.