小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；连词使用偏少。

　may day is coming. i’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to wu quan park this holiday. 　　in the park, i see many trees and beautiful flowers. there are many children and many happy playing games, too.my parents take me to the zoo. there are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. i like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. how lovely they are! 　 I have a good time that day. what a beautiful and happy holiday.