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my school is baodai primary school, this is a beautiful school. there are many flowers, many leaves, many classrooms, many offices, a big hall, a playground in our school, in the playground we can run and play.also there is a garden in my school, many flowers and trees in it, we often walk in the garden after lunch. i like my school very much! do you like my school?