小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend .Her hair like her mother .Her hair is yellow .Her nose like her farher..She have a borther and a sister.She is a smart girl .She haver a lot toys.she like nice flower. She like reading book and hearing music. She want to an hostess .