小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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This is my new theacher.She is Korean. She is a humour and kindness a woman. So, We love her.She have black and light eye and tall nose.Today she dressing a red dress and dressing a red shoes.Look!She is beatiful women.Do you like my theacher? She is very kind and nice. She is very busy.