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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12876
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, we have exposure through the internet to a brilliant new world and internet is exactly convenience, useful which has been the greatest invention in 20th century. If you have urgent problems, paste it in the bbs, obligating net user are willing to assist you. In the office cube, officers hold conferences through the internet and one particular tool for chatting such as MSN or QQ play a critical role in the daily work. However, communication one on one always is everlasting and unreplaceable. Firstly, face to face communication is a combination of voice and facial expression, which reflects the interior of the speakers. Secondly, contacting each other is enjoyable and exciting rather than utilitarian. Thirdly, the in-depth discussion face to face is memorable in a tea house where has a comfortable environment with music and green tea. So, economic communication is instant with lower humanity, rather, formal chatting has been full of sese of feeling.

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