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文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，学术词汇积累也做的很棒；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
Last 10 decades ago, people thought that we could get much achievements which will cover all fields of life due to development of society.However, today, an increasing number of people are losing their hearts. It is undeniable that human race have been maked many achievements.Compared with past, people have grasped much more advance knowledge to boost improvement of economy,education,as well as science and technology.For example, we can travel the whole world due to the invention of flights,which can reduce distances between places.When we walk on streets, we can see many private cars running.The reason is that with the development of technology, manufactors have been declined the cost of production,meanwhile,the price of cars can be gradually afforded by most families. Yet there is still a dark side in this picture.During the process of development,people always pay more attention to profits in short-term so that ignore the importance of environmental problems.After damaging natural environment,desertization,soil acidification as well as global warming have been caused serious consequences and theartened our life.Furthermore,for most industrialized countries,how to acquire much more fuel,such as fossil oil and natural gas,become a critical challenge which is also the main blasting fuse of eventful and turbulent in modern society. In sum,personally,though we have achieved many progress,we still face many new problems which seem more difficult and durable.Therefore,it is too early to assess that human have changed the world.
