文中句式变化多样,同时从句使用很棒;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中词汇表达不够丰富,学术词汇方面要多累积;请注意分段。
Nowadays, this society has much behavior which is not honest, this is a gross phnemoneo.It make us feel uncomfortable when someone doing any bad thing to us, but what can we do, our country is great, our standard ask us to be a citizen who is obey the rules of laws or common consciences. There is a motto in China: what you did is not pay back to you because this is not the right time. It teach us to do the good thing, not the evil thing, or you will must be feel guilty or