2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(30)写作:My hometown

单词拼写做的很好，但文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

my hometown is very buautiful .A quite and beautiful place in which my live.I love my hometown,because it my heart place and it makes me happy and relaxed. In my hometown ,the air is very fresh than other places. It is close to the city centre, 15 minutes drive to the city centre．There is a park in the town, people like the morning exercise in the park．The place I love the most is the Youth Activity Center, where there are a lot of things to do. 　　I love my hometown。