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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3087
要求:
题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分44.0分
评语:

作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life,and millions of young person have made friends online.In my opinion,I believe making friends online is wise.First of all.It can accumulate many of social relationships in the future.It can help us to explore unknown to the world.And we can learn some knowledge from them.

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