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初中英语命题作文真题演练(95):素质教育

发布时间:2014-03-26 17:10浏览次数:2460
要求:

为了进一步实施素质教育,山东省所有初中学生都能享受到两天的周末自由时间。在这两天的时间里,有的学生走进图书馆、书店充实自己的知识;有的加入体育俱乐部,健身强体;有的积极参加社会实践活动;还有的在家帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务……你是怎么度过的?你对两天周末有何看法?请以Finally, Week Ends为题写一篇80词左右的文章。
提示:

1、素质教育quality education两天周末 two-day-weekend 充实,丰富enrich社会实践social practice 社会society

2、不要出现真实的人名和学校名。

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。

用户练习作文:

I have a classmate. He’s a good friend of mine. He always says to me:“I hate the school in China. I’m freaked out with this. And I like the school in the United States.” I think he’s right. The children in the US are very easy, they learn a lot during the games. They love study very much. They think study is important and interesting. But lots of children in China are very tired. From Monday to Friday, they should go to school and do so much homework after school. At the weekend or on holidays, they have to go to a lot of cram schools. And the cram schools also have a lot of homework. At the same time, they need to join in many competitions like Maths Olympic competition or some English competition. The adults always say something like this to their children: You should study hard, and do not think about playing. That sounds like playing is illegal for children. And they don’t have any time to play, either! They’re just like snails. Because of carrying a lot of stress, they can only move slowly. Moreover, some adults don’t take off the stress but lash them and say: Go as quickly as you can! And many children feel unhappy. They think that they’re not people.They think they’re machine. Some studying machine. But the human world needs persons who have ability! It doesn’t need so-called studying machine! So, I want to say: We need more free time to do something we interested in. Do not be a studying machine!

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