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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1782
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In this classroom, some students study with their friends or partner who think this pattern would help them working hard. however, most time, they chat with each other and look what other person doing. And some students study lonely, they studying excellently quiet and just do what he want. Different person have unfamiliar style of studying. I recommend studying by myself, because when I study alone , I just pay attention to my works and nothing can disturb me. when I met some difficult questions, maybe I can overcome it by myself hardly but if someone besides me, I will ask him to solve their problems for me. above all, I have many questions in my life, so I must do it by myself without others help. We should conquer trouble to build our independence. If one day there is nobody to help you out, you will feel anxious and less helpful. When foreigners grow up at eighteen, they must live out of home and pay their debts after graduation, so they are more independent than us. If they met some troubles, they can handle it fluently without help. nowadays, people are more isolate that few person like helping others. If we overcome questions with ourselves that nobody can defeat us.

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