文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
our house lives in the fourth avenue of xi an city, Shannxi province. it is cost a lot of money of my family. Although my parents took out of their saving, the money was still not enough. however, thanks to my relatives, the house is bought by my family. it seems like that it is important to have good relationship with your relatives.