- 分享到:
简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The Great Use of Life to Spend it for Something That Will Outlast it There are so many happy things in our life,but not all of these things are meaningful.It is known that everyone hope they can have a meaningful life .Howerer,what is the greatest use of life,and what should we do to pursuit this wonderful thing? It is not easy to have a chance to get this kind of life.For everyone,it is different to spend the greatest use of life for something that will outlast it.But they still have the same features.And in my point of view,I want to talk about the meaningful things for our college students. We can have a lot of spare time in college which we can allocate freely.But many students spend it to watching TV,surfing online,and do something bum.I reckon that this phonemenon should be paid much attention,and we should do some vualuble things. First, we are supposed to attach the importance of study. It's the most important thing we should do in college.We can get a lot of knowledge and we can solve many problems through these theroies.Then we should participate in many after-class activities,thus benefiting us to get many abilities. The last,we are expected to help others.It is the right thing we should do . I think these three things are of greatnest use.
