小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hi! I have a good friend.His name is Yuan Yuan.He has short hair.He is of medium height.He has big eyes.He like to play soccer.He is very handsome.He plays basketball very well.After school,he usually gets home with his friends.After dinner,he usually exercises for an hour,And he does his homework at six forty. This is my good friend----Yuan Yuan！