Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
In the new millennium, cellphones are set to become a necessity of individuals’ life. It comes no surprise that a vast majority of people are indulged in their new parter, considering the great pleasure and convenience it brings about. It is no exaggeration to say, mobile phone have integrated to our daily life not only for the function of photo taking and communication, text messages but also sweet apps of calling taxi, online shopping, news reading and friend connecting and information sharing, so on and so forth. Still, there are some others viewing smart cell phone as a curse of modern life, for it cause public apathy and do harm for physical health especially our eye sights and cervical vertebra. It should be familiar to you that in the evening dinner of Chinese New Year’s Eve, relatives and elders are sitting around the table to have dinner and talk about something over the past year。 However, young people of this table are watching their phones, maybe sending message, writing microblog or micro, which arouse great controversy in the society to criticize the over use of this electronic product. Nowadays, more people are suffered disease of cervical spondylosis, caused by playing it for a long time to a great extent.
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