小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.His name is Li Ming.He has short curly hair,and he is of medium height.He is good at playing basketball,but he can't play tennis well.He goes to school at half past six every morning.In the afternoon,he eat lunch at twelve o'clock.After school,he gets home with his friends.In the evening,he either watch TV or plays computer games.But he doesn't do his homework never,because he does his homework in the school.This is my good friend----Lin Ming!