小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend . She is a beautiful girl.She has long hair,a big black eyes and red mouth. Her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl .She likes reading books ,playing computer games and chess .she is also nice , She often helps us . Our classmates like her very much.