小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a nice friend. she has a big eyes ,a small mouth,and have a round face.I really like her,she always ready to help others, whoever in trouble,she ofthen without a thought help he.she like drawing,and foodball.she ls a special gril!I think everybody are will like her if with her have a long time.