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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；熟练使用了一些长难句；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
There‘s a famous saying that goes,"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.“,and i am quite in favor of that. The most valuable thing in our life is time and it's the way we spend time that determines the quality of our life.So it's naturally follows that we are ought to make the most of our life and do the things that will fully fulfilled our ability and endure regardless of the flow of time. I'd like to take Hawking as an example,who has been confronted to a wheel chair for several years,however,he didn't give up his faith in life and make great contributions to science. As for us students,it's also possible for us to do something meaningful to extend our life.For example,we can do part-time jobs to share burdens with our parents;besides.we can go to travelling with our friends to broaden our horizons. All in all,we should work hard and live happily to live up to the expectations of the significance of our life.
