题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。
Recently ,more and more people feel that the quality of life is decreasing ,the reason are as following.Firstly, environment pollution is one of the causes,private cars are everywhere , Secondly , health problem is another reason ,people sit in the office for too long time .Last but not least,the work pressure.boss and worker never assist with each other. The ways to solve this problem are as following:use green technology,keep health conscious ,take full use of the exercise instruments and learn to reduce pressure of yourself