2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

文中词汇使用灵活，学术词汇使用较丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

To live in large city means more opportunities, but also means more competes. Not only that, when people gathered around large cities to find their places, daily expenditure would reach higher level, along with traffic jams and air pollution. The reasons behind are very obvious in China, but the solutions are not easily found, or only need to wait and see. China has a huge population, so national well being remains as a big challenge to the government budget. Ordinary people are exposed to such anxieties as health concern, unemployment, housing loans or rents. Housing spending account for a big expenditure which always affect people's life to a great level. We have seen that prices of most commodities like TV, motor vehicle, PC, Mobile phone went down after new generation product turn out, but not the real estate mainly due to the complexity of the whole industry. Rome was not built in one day. TV, motor vehicle, PC, Mobile phone lower their prices because technology advancement. In contrary, the cost of building a complexity is still high, not to mention the government's involving in land contracts do some favor in the housing price. I wish one day that some technologies like three dimensional printing and new materials can bring ordinary people cheap houses which are in varied shapes as well as light and mobile, just like the flying house in the movie Up if we could add it a aircraft engine. If that day comes, we can drive our house around. isn't it thrilling! So, I hope that one day we or even it's our future generations can own this house, just like TV, motor vehicle, PC, Mobile phone which are popular in most parts of the world.