单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段。
Dear David, I know you will come to Lanzhou to learn Chinese. Let me till you how to learn the Chinese well. First, you should learn the phonetic well. Second, you can talk with people in Chines. Third, you can write the stories or diary in Chinese every day. Then, your dream that learn the Chinese well will come true soon. Yours, Chen Quan